OH MY GOD! WHAT A MATCH.I have bolded the first sentence for the simple reason that this being the first thing I have ever been writing and not knowing what to write after that sentence,From last 3 minutes..I kept on rewriting the same thing on the same sentence. Guess what, by telling you this. I filled up almost 1,2,3… lines of my post (he he... what ever) . Now coming back to the match. It is the IPL between Punjab and Chennai. It went till the Super over.
OO hang on! This not about cricket this is something about how I wrote my first post. Now it’s around 1.47AM of 22 of March 2010. Let’s Rewind
(I thought of using picture of a clock. As my friend told me that if you use pictures it will give you length. Now I would like to tell my friend, Dear if you can fill the first paragraph like that you don’t need a Pic… or worry about length of the post…)
Ok Ok… Lets Rewind….
It was around 10.45pm yesterday (technically) I went to sleep after watching cricket match for around 45min and deciding that Chennai will win the match. At 11.33pm (as per my call logs) “Beku” called saying Chennai screwed up, it is a draw “scores at level” .it came to Super Over to decide the winner. After the super over Due to the Yuraj Singh’s magical display of strokes losing Punjab team won. Mean while my roommate.” Patel saab” came in to the flat after watching a movie in which hero kills himself due to love failure and started preaching about L-O-V-E.
Mr. Li” and Me bugged “Patel saab” as his Preach, breached in to cricketing atmosphere and fact being he himself few year back was a big lovser(loser in love).
I forgot mention another roommate “Mr. Li” who sitting next to me while we were watching cricket. He is a great sportsman, athlete and fitness freak. I need to appoint stenographer to just type his introduction. Once “Mr.Li” told me “he will kill himself…if he get to my weight or get my six pack“ (jealous – you know what I mean)
“After a while came back to my bedroom rested flat on my Bed thinking, (“why does the…{that was a stupid Thought}… ok…. {Another stupid thought} aaa forget it…
Then at 1.01 AM, I sent a message to Beku “Sleeping?” and Forwarded the same to my another friend Abey…and was going through my contact list…
MY phone Rang….
Beku
Calling…
“ Yo bro did not sleep yet?”
He said “no”
I told him lets do some thing new and creative… this weekend…
Then to my surprise replay came
“I am thinking ways to approach…her…”
I said “What”… Are you serious?
If my dad likes her, I will marry her…
(I guess my suggestion of doing new and creative … he took it seriously)
Oooooh oooooooh two weeks back beku told me. In the opposite flat where he lives there is “sathsang”- a society where they preach some sort of spirituality, meditation and being silent… He saw a girl very good looking…(I don’t know what is his metrics for a good-looking girl… but he said it twice.) and yesterday, I made fun him. When he said she is not coming from last week… I asked him how he got to know? has he joined…society?
He told me NO – He get as he was unable to find her shoes in the corridor…
I said what -- shoes? What non-sense….
To pull his leg… further… I asked him steal her shoes so that, while she searches for her shoes he can talk to her.
He gave me the same disgusting smile. Which I am used to get for my PJ’s… and left.
Now coming back to our call…. At 1.01 AM….
After he said…
IF my dad likes her. I will marry her…
I told him…steal the girls shoe and your father shoes also…. so that they get talking….
I could feel his… irritation in the radiation of the phone… to pacify…
I told him of I ever wrote a book or something I will definitely write this…story (I have been telling this to all my friends…)
I wished him all the best… cut the call
Sleeping on my Bed….
I thought that this Guy is so different from her… she is in to a Society where they teach mediation and being silent…. where as my friend is loud, outgoing… he likes noise…
Till last year his point one: On his do before you die List was “ Going to a Disco”
Now he is interested a girl who is completely…opposite… and forgot to tell you this society she goes they even preach…being single all the life…
I could not have flunked in any exam in college. If papers had a question
“ List the differences between these two instead of (conductor and inductor)?"
And at 1 .40 … while looking at my fan spinning… The thought came to my mind..
OH MY GOD! WHAT A MATCH!
now its 1.44AM of 22 of March 2010.
You want to know what I did after that… read it from the beginning.
OO hang on! This not about cricket this is something about how I wrote my first post. Now it’s around 1.47AM of 22 of March 2010. Let’s Rewind
(I thought of using picture of a clock. As my friend told me that if you use pictures it will give you length. Now I would like to tell my friend, Dear if you can fill the first paragraph like that you don’t need a Pic… or worry about length of the post…)
Ok Ok… Lets Rewind….
It was around 10.45pm yesterday (technically) I went to sleep after watching cricket match for around 45min and deciding that Chennai will win the match. At 11.33pm (as per my call logs) “Beku” called saying Chennai screwed up, it is a draw “scores at level” .it came to Super Over to decide the winner. After the super over Due to the Yuraj Singh’s magical display of strokes losing Punjab team won. Mean while my roommate.” Patel saab” came in to the flat after watching a movie in which hero kills himself due to love failure and started preaching about L-O-V-E.
Mr. Li” and Me bugged “Patel saab” as his Preach, breached in to cricketing atmosphere and fact being he himself few year back was a big lovser(loser in love).
I forgot mention another roommate “Mr. Li” who sitting next to me while we were watching cricket. He is a great sportsman, athlete and fitness freak. I need to appoint stenographer to just type his introduction. Once “Mr.Li” told me “he will kill himself…if he get to my weight or get my six pack“ (jealous – you know what I mean)
“After a while came back to my bedroom rested flat on my Bed thinking, (“why does the…{that was a stupid Thought}… ok…. {Another stupid thought} aaa forget it…
Then at 1.01 AM, I sent a message to Beku “Sleeping?” and Forwarded the same to my another friend Abey…and was going through my contact list…
MY phone Rang….
Beku
Calling…
“ Yo bro did not sleep yet?”
He said “no”
I told him lets do some thing new and creative… this weekend…
Then to my surprise replay came
“I am thinking ways to approach…her…”
I said “What”… Are you serious?
If my dad likes her, I will marry her…
(I guess my suggestion of doing new and creative … he took it seriously)
Oooooh oooooooh two weeks back beku told me. In the opposite flat where he lives there is “sathsang”- a society where they preach some sort of spirituality, meditation and being silent… He saw a girl very good looking…(I don’t know what is his metrics for a good-looking girl… but he said it twice.) and yesterday, I made fun him. When he said she is not coming from last week… I asked him how he got to know? has he joined…society?
He told me NO – He get as he was unable to find her shoes in the corridor…
I said what -- shoes? What non-sense….
To pull his leg… further… I asked him steal her shoes so that, while she searches for her shoes he can talk to her.
He gave me the same disgusting smile. Which I am used to get for my PJ’s… and left.
Now coming back to our call…. At 1.01 AM….
After he said…
IF my dad likes her. I will marry her…
I told him…steal the girls shoe and your father shoes also…. so that they get talking….
I could feel his… irritation in the radiation of the phone… to pacify…
I told him of I ever wrote a book or something I will definitely write this…story (I have been telling this to all my friends…)
I wished him all the best… cut the call
Sleeping on my Bed….
I thought that this Guy is so different from her… she is in to a Society where they teach mediation and being silent…. where as my friend is loud, outgoing… he likes noise…
Till last year his point one: On his do before you die List was “ Going to a Disco”
Now he is interested a girl who is completely…opposite… and forgot to tell you this society she goes they even preach…being single all the life…
I could not have flunked in any exam in college. If papers had a question
“ List the differences between these two instead of (conductor and inductor)?"
And at 1 .40 … while looking at my fan spinning… The thought came to my mind..
OH MY GOD! WHAT A MATCH!
now its 1.44AM of 22 of March 2010.
You want to know what I did after that… read it from the beginning.
HeHE...
ReplyDeleteEntertaining one... Finally the "Bhav" is lessenned :P and you have posted your blog! btw, is it going to be a "to be contd..." sort of blog...?
keep up writing...
Mr. Bond I like your blog !!! ary I love your blog ..after long time again..I feel that I got a new book of Chintu (Chetan Bhagat).
ReplyDeletethe way you starts and end your blog.. Really very interesting.
Are beku ka kia hua ??...shoes chori kiye ya nahi ..Really I want to know ..
you seems some freaky mind..a style of starting and matching sentenses within paragraph was fantastic...looks during school paragraph writing had been interesting subject for you :-) keep writing..
ReplyDeleteNice one sadiqe...meru inta baga express chestaru ani expect cheyledu...hmmm...nijamgane chetan bhagat gurtostaru idi chadivite...want to c your next blog soooooon(if possible another love story)...veelaite...meedi...
ReplyDeleteSuperb writing skills, I never expect a blog like this...By the way who is Beku...I think he is the hero of this story.. once again it is very nice one and very much interesting for me...I will promote this blog to all our friends..keep going on......
ReplyDeleteOh My God What a Post :). reminds me of chetan bhagat a bit.BEKU ur best frd i guess would have become ur jani dusman, after u have open his pole (hindi wala) publically.But he is earning more publicity den the author himself.Enoyed ur post.. keep writing.. waiting for the next episode :)
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ReplyDeleteThank you...4 showing interest...
Trying to find some impurity around.... hope i found something soon....
hehe....(people are scared these days to share things)
anyways
"Mr.Li is getting interesting text messages these days..."
hmmm..really good work dude...i finally got time to read it.its quite expressive of you to pen down something irreverent and still interesting, i guess its the style u have chosen. The grammar is fine leaving few bits. Good work overall would like to see further blogs..
ReplyDeleteFew weeks ago, i read the first paragraph and left it. But, got the feeling that "as per my knowledge he doesn't read novels...how come he has started it all in a novel style".....now after reading the complete thing ( he called and reminded me to read it completely), i was surprised by the way he has packed the whole current and flash back things without creating confusion. I am feeling it was quiet creative the way he has framed the characters because i know what his sources are. I feel i know his affiliation with those characters and that is the reason i felt this whole thing as creative. I liked the idea of stealing the father's shoes.....looks like he has got so much of CB's thing into him from the comments...looking forward for my character in your blogs......
ReplyDeleteDude...its really coolest blog... :)i have seen your creative side 1st time which is really interesting. specialy i love the para where u have written as steal girls and ur fathers shoe so they can talk...awesome yaar!! keep writing blogs :) its really enjoyable while reading.:)
ReplyDeleteHey dude....today i met phani, he told me about your blog. I am impressed in maintaing your topic as a conversation and I like the way u ended it but starting is not that good handle the interest in topic till u mentioned "let's rewind" after second para. Takecare on good start, still it is appropriate beginning for a good ending. I never read any of the chetan bhagat's stories so I can't compare but this is the one of the best short stories I read so far. The most fun and enjoyable part is including our beku, Patel saheb(hahahaha) and I liked the new name of our buddy as Mr Li(hehehehe) I liked this dude. First I don't know about his name phani told me about that. Good man keep writing. All the best.
ReplyDeleteGood one .. refresh old memories
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